When asked about his uniqueness, Eric cites data about his grade point averages, leadership roles, and production quotas. What is missing?
a summary of teamwork experiences
a description of volunteer activities
reviews from supervisors
an engaging story involving Eric as a character
What is missing is an engaging story involving Eric as a character. While Eric provides quantitative data about his achievements, a personal story would add depth and illustrate his unique qualities and experiences in a more relatable way.